I opened this page and looked at it for about half an hour,
then I realised I was looking at the subject of the blog.
That’s right, the blank page. It’s either a curse or a
blessing. I’ve always looked on it as a curse. I’ve spent several delirious
weeks developing a story and characters, and I have my notes on another piece
of computer paper.
That blank page terrifies me. Will the story translate well
on to the page, or will it die a death? Or will I have to fight to tell the
stories, stop part way through when the characters turn out to be different
than the planning said they were?
More often than not, the latter is what’s happening to me. I
have a very tight deadline coming up, and I haven’t finished the book. But that’s
because I had to stop when the character revealed hidden depths I really wanted
to explore. I could have written the story fast, the way I’d planned it, and
hit the deadline with time to spare. But I didn’t think that would be doing
justice to the character, or the story. So I stopped and spent a long time
thinking. Around a week. That’s why I write fast, because usually, I’ve worked
through the story before the dreaded blank page appears. But I seem to be
entering another level, because I often want to stop and, if not take the plot
in a different direction, then work it through a bit deeper.
Plus, I suck at writing beginnings. Endings—piece of cake. I
know them and the story by then, and so I know when I’ve written the last
sentence. They want me and the reader to go away so they can get on with their
lives. It’s a hill a writer has to get through. Invariably I start writing, and
it goes now. I’m getting better, but then, after fifty-odd books, it’s about
time I did. When I first started, I used to write out what I wanted to,
backstory, planning meetings, all that—then I’d delete it. I needed to write it
to get going. The reader didn’t need it, though, so out it went. I’ve seen
published books with those scenes in, and wondered why the editor didn’t get
tougher, but perhaps the author fought for them. “How will the reader know that
my hero is a dragon shifter if I don’t tell them?” Maybe when he does the
dragon thing, they might. That’s what teachers of writing mean when they say
action, not words, is needed. Don’t tell, show. It’s much more exciting.
Beginnings I have great problems with, which is probably why
sending in the first three chapters of a book isn’t a good idea for me. My editors
have to work with me to get it right. Once that’s sorted out, I’m away. I love
middles, when everything is getting unravelled, and endings, when it works out,
but beginnings—no.
So yes, the blank page. I seem to have filled this one. See what
I mean about beginnings?
Lynne Connolly
6 comments:
Oh, yeah, Lynne, that blank page terrifies me too. I play with the story in my head, have a general idea of where it's going, definitely know how it ends (always with a HEA and the mystery solved). But getting the right beginning, starting the story in the right place, that's always tough. Invariably I'll start at the wrong point and end up having to pitch out a couple of chapters before I get that "Ah yes" moment and now it's the right place for that life-changing event.
Great post.
I just start writing and work my way into the story that way. I always have an idea of where it should start, but most often it changes by the time I'm finished. Now, endings... those I have a problem with!
How interesting - for me, it's the middle I struggle with. I love beginnings...and I can usually visualize the ending. It's how to get from A to B that is the challenge for me.
The middle for me--I have to remind myself that not every i has to be dotted. I know how I want the book I'm working on now to end but it's the first draft and my characters might insist on changes.
I alway have my beginning and end. I love filling in the middle. My problem is I over fill. then have to cut big time
same here. start is the most difficult part and once you have done so you are then bombarded by thousands of thoughts.
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