I’m writing a great suspense novel. The love interest is
hot, the mystery is intriguing, and the heroine knows how to rock a pair of
keds. There’s just one problem, the villain doesn’t ring true.
In order for the plot to work as it is, we need to buy that
he likes murdering people just for funzies. He also doesn’t want to get caught,
but he loves teasing the FBI with hints.
Now, when a villain isn’t ringing true, I have to ask a few
questions:
Are there people in
real life like this?
Sadly, yes. So, it does pass the “real world” test.
But that doesn’t mean a reader is going to buy it. I mean, a
vending machine is more likely to kill you than a shark, but I haven’t seen
a whole lot of stories about a small-town mayor dealing with a mysterious,
killer vending machine. (Though, Vending-Machine-Nado may be in development?)
I’d bet that most readers would find a vending machine
related death highly unbelievable, whereas
we all know when we’re at the beach we’re just inches away from being squished
to death by ferocious shark jaws. So, while these attributes may occur IRL, in
a way, fiction has to be truer than reality.
Have books and movies
worked with that kind of villain before?
Yeah. Pretty much every serial killer movie, TV show, book,
and macabre Sunday morning comic comes to mind. So, that’s not it…
If these motivations
can work, both in real life and on the page, what’s wrong here? Is there some
aspect of this character that’s different than characters with similar
motivations in pieces that work?
Ding ding ding!
Random serial killers “work” as villains because, I think,
we imagine that person has a compulsive desire to be in control, to be special,
and to feel clever. They murder so that they can have the ultimate control over
someone else. There aren’t many serial killers out there, so this act makes them
special. And they tease the cops so they can feel like a superior mouse to the
stupid cat cops.
They’ve lacked all
these elements in their life, which is why they are willing to take such
extreme measures to attain them. (Full disclaimer, I’m not saying this is the
actual psychology of serial killers, as I think it’s likely much more nuanced
than that, but I think this is how most readers/viewers would interpret those
types of motivations.)
I’m pretty sure that the reason my villain doesn’t make
sense is because he has a speculative power, one that would give him a certain
amount of control over other people.My villain doesn’t need to kill people to feel special and
in control. He already is special and
in control! So his motivation lacks authenticity.
Now of course, there are evil characters
with super powers, but they usually have some higher motivation, like the
pursuit of power, revenge, protection of other superheroes, love, an intense
desire for tomato soup on a rainy day, etc. etc.
By realizing what, exactly, is the problem, I can take a few steps back
and see that his motivation has to involve higher stakes for him, he has to have a higher
purpose.
Now I just have to figure out what that might be….hmmmmm….
6 comments:
Boy, I'm going to be more careful around vending machines! LOL
I've found that when I feel stuck in my story, it's usually because I need to go back and work on the villain, so evil motivation is very much a part of my daily work life. ;)
Thanks for your post, Caitlin!
Wow! This is wonderful.I'm one of those readers who doesn't always need to know the villain's motivation. Knowing he's evil can be enough. But.... I feel if the author knows it comes through on the page in subtle creepy ways.
Interesting post, Caitlin. It always helps me to remember that everyone is the hero of his or her own story. We may see the villain as the... well, villain... but he sees himself as right.
But I'm with Anne Marie. I'm avoiding vending machines from now on.
Yes, the villain, in most cases, thinks he/she is the hero! That's a good point to remember, for sure! Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and I'm glad I could spread awareness about the dangers of vending machines ;-)
I did wwwaaaaaayyyy too much research into serial killers when I wrote The Professor for Carina. (I had to quit when I started having nightmares!)
You're right - well, I might have to dodge those vending machines! - the villain has to be believable, even if it's subliminal.
Good luck with those tweaks to your story!
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