Like so many good ideas, h.c. can be expressed in a single statement: A high concept is two worlds that should never meet but do. For example,
Not all
opposites, however, amount to a high concept. While Cinderella has the
necessary elements of two worlds colliding, the story is so familiar it offers
no surprises. But how about this? A single mom is struggling to make ends meet
when her child is killed in a drive-by shooting. To avenge her child, she takes
on the mobs. Or this? Your character goes in for a latte; somebody else drinks
it and dies. What should not happen, happens. Your character is thrust into a
situation she never asked for and doesn’t want to be in. Think of the tension
this creates!
Another
example is Allied, the recent Brad
Pitt/ Marion Cotillard flick. A WWII British soldier falls in love with a
German spy. And closer to home, in my soon-to-be-released mystery, Murder on Pea Pike, a country girl
outfoxes a city slicker.
What makes
a h.c. interesting is not the event itself but what goes wrong in the
characters’ lives. Your heroine has to feel she can’t go there again. It hurts
too much. It’s too threatening, too dangerous. Despite all these fears, she
plunges into what frightens her, into what is inherently dangerous and that
energizes both her and your story.
Another
important point: By thinking in high concept terms, you may well discover your
story’s tag line, the single statement that sums up your novel. Consider what
you’ve written. What polar opposites have you pulled together? Find out and you
have your tag line, your sales hook. Or how about this? Create the h.c. tag
line first and you may have a capsule idea for your next book.Here are a few I played around with:
Football
hero meets crippled girl.
Tough
commando meets war-hating pacifist.Ex-con meets former nun.
Murder
suspect meets victim’s sister.
Millionaire
playboy meets bag lady.
Starving
novelist meets celebrity chef.
I think
my tries got better as the list went on.
That last one kind of has potential. What do you think?
Finally,
to revert to my old teaching persona, I’ve come to realize that high concept is
somewhat akin to metaphor, the yoking together of dissimilar objects and
treating them as if they were one--one good, strong sales pitch!
LINKS:
Camel Press, Amazon, Heather Burch, Murder on Pea Pike
11 comments:
Great information, Jean, and well presented. I've loved every single one of your books and cannot wait to read Murder on Pea Pike!
Thanks, Lynnette. Your words are music to my ears.
Interesting post, Jean. I have to say, I've never really given a lot of thought to high concept ideas, or whether or not mine are, but now you've given me something to think about.
A fun read, Jean. I think several of those ideas have potential! But yes, the starving writer strikes closer to home than most. ;)
For me High Concept is emotional and brings something different to the table yet has something we can all understand and are vested in. Easy to say not so easy to write. Great psot Jean.
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Interesting blog! Can't wait to read your book!
Great post, Jean. I always forget to think high concept like this. Terrific reminder!
High concept is something we strive for too often after we've created our story (which isn't high concept). I like the idea of trying to come up with a tag line first. It might help us remember that if we can't make a good one, maybe our story isn't where it should be at. Thanks for the hints to get me thinking.
I'm so glad you wrote this post, Jean! I've always wondered what the heck "high concept" actually was (I used to have a job creating series for a children's book packager where they talked about it all the time, and how we should come up with them, but I never really got it). Thank you!
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